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My Ninth Birthday Present...

LJ - Year 6

I've had many great days in my life however; my ninth birthday has to be the best day in my life (so far!) This is what happened? As I awoke on my ninth birthday I had the sensation in my body that it was going to be an enjoyable day. My mum said to me: "You need to get in the car!" After a while of wondering what was going on, the car finally stopped outside a pet shop. I was puzzled. Mum and I entered the small shop. "Come and look at these!" said mum. As I walked over to where mum was, a sudden thought entered my head. Mum wasn't going to buy me a pet, was she? "Daisy, I have being wondering if you wanted a guinea pig," said mum. I froze. Was this a dream? "Yes please," I managed to whisper. I chose a guinea pig that was a mixture of jet black and chestnut brown. She was beautiful. That after noon, as I sat in the blazing sun, I stroked my new pet. I loved the way she was so soft and warm. By then I knew that this had been the best day ever!