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Trapped Underground

SF - Year 6

“Help” screamed Aimie suddenly she realised she was stuck because a pipe had burst underground. On the main road of meopham. She was petrified. But no one could hear her because the mud had fallen on top of her.

 

“Ouch what’s that something is digging into my back?” so as Aimie turned around she saw a pipe was dug in her back. So she had an idea she yanked the pipe out of the ground and tried to whack the ground above her.

 

She sat there for 30 minutes trying and trying but it did not work. She tried screaming again she screamed “help me help me can anybody hear me?” suddenly a policeman called paddy said to a policewomen called Sandra “did you hear something?”

“Yes I did” said Sandra.

  “It seems like it is coming from the hole” said paddy. So they went to check it out. They dug and dug and eventually got to aimie.they helped her out and took her home aimie thought she was gone for ages but she was only gone 5 minutes.

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