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The Worm and the Mouse

JB - Year 6

Once there was a newborn mouse, Who lived in a very little house, He was as happy as can be, Playing the drums, and watching TV. Once there was a little worm, Who liked to wriggle about and squirm, He was as happy as can be, Playing the drums, and watching TV. One day the worm went for a stroll, When he came across a little hole, He peeked inside and then he saw, A mouse, drinking a drink with a straw. Worm wriggled back in fear, How had the mouse got to here? But mouse did not want to offend, Instead he asked, “Will you be my friend?” From then on worm lived with mouse, In the same old very little house, They were as happy as can be, Playing the drums, and watching TV.

Small Girl, Big World

AR - Year 6

As I walked along the grey bleary alleyway I heard a loud CRASH and everything went black.I awoke to find everything was huge! "Help" I cried "Help" but it was no use my cry was probably a mouse squeak to passers by.I wondered what on earth could have made me this small.Just as I thought that rain came toppling down and I ran for shelter but I slipped into what would seem a puddle at my normal size but to me it was a river,I was soaked.When I finally found shelter by some rusty dustbins I began to cry wanting my mum and dad even my annoying little sister,Katie thinking about my family I fall into deep sleep going deeper and deeper.After what felt like hours I opened my eyes to find myself on my sofa in my living room with my mum and dad by me "Oh darling we found you collapsed by the dustbins we were so worried" they exclaimed.I never knew how I got so small but I'v never told anyone its my secret, my adventure.

I'm a Rabbit

BW - Year 6

“Aaa I’m falling!” Jessie screamed as she fell through her trampoline into another world. She was going into her own adventure.

“Ouch my tail!” Jessie said as she fell to the floor.

“I never knew I had a tail …fur as well I’m an animal!” Jessie thought to herself. She looked into a broken mirror and saw that she was a rabbit.

An unknown rabbit cried as he walked by.

“Can I help you sir?” Jessie asked.

“If I can, can I borrow your glasses”, he answered.

“Yes you can”, Jessie said.

“Thank you”, said the other rabbit.

“What’s your name? Jessie asked “Mines Jessie”.

“Its Darren”, He replied.

They started walking back to Darren’s house. When they arrived Darren started to read, when Jessie interrupted.

“Can you send me back home to my parents?” Jessie asked.

“Yes I do, what’s your full name?” he replied.

“Jessie Clinton”, Jessie said.

“When I say what I’m going to say, jump three times and you’ll go home”, Darren said.

“Send Jessie Clinton straight home safe and sound”, Darren said.

Then Jessie jumped three times, she turned back into a person and immediately found herself at home!

Lost in Disneyland

TC - Year 6

It was getting late and Poppy was worried that she’d never find her family in busy Disneyland.

“Help!” she shouted. But no one heard her.

Poppy raced through the crowds into the castle. All of a sudden everything changed. Poppy saw her Mum and Dad but they were in dirty clothes and washing dishes.

“Mum, Dad!” Poppy shouted and rushed over to them, but they carried on washing. “Hello…?”

Her Mum and Dad still carried on. It was as if she didn’t exist. Just then a tall, spiteful girl in a grand dress burst through the door. The girl looked very like Poppy’s sister.

“Who are you?” The girl demanded in a posh voice.

“P…p...p...Poppy,” replied Poppy, extremely scared.

“Come with me!” Pulling Poppy’s wrist, she dragged her into the next room.

Suddenly, it all changed back.

“Poppy!” Her sister ran up to her and hugged her tight. “You’re back!”

“Mum, Dad!” Poppy dashed over to them.

“Poppy, you’re safe,” her Mum cried, holding her tight. “Let’s go back to the hotel room”

“You can tell us all about your little adventure” Her Dad added.

“what an adventure” Poppy thought

The Underground City

AL - Year 6

“I’m sinking into the ground!” Robert screamed while the mysterious carpet yanked him onto the living room floor. He saw the underground city to be very strange as gravity flipped him over. He was frozen with fear. He stared at the brown city. “All made of mud,” he thought.

Robert wandered of to the factory section of the city. It had been wrecked. He found a note saying “Ladders”. He found another carpet just like his, only brown. He found a generator and charged the carpet with energy as the sign said “charge carpets here”. He went out and climbed the everlasting ledge and stuck the carpet onto the ceiling. “It actually sticks!” Robert said to himself.

He put his hand on he carpet and was sucked back to the living room. He was relieved. On his carpet, a note said, “Carpet experiment failed”. Robert was lucky to get back home. He was very glad. The ladder he found was proof that he had been sucked in and went to show his parents. The carpet disintegrated and was never found again.

The World of Past Kings and Queens

JC - Year 6

Exhilarated by the extreme speed of the ride he was going, Jim quickly shrieked

“We’re going to fly off!” He realised horrifically the cart was going to fly off the bar at Chessington World of Adventures, on the Vampire ride…

The cart was speeding up rapidly! There was no way to stop it, and then BANG! They had just come off.

“Where am I?” muttered Jim…

When he came to, he found himself surrounded by past Kings and Queens and a queen spoke

“To get back to earth you must tell us the code to your grand electricity!”

“Well I can tell you how to make it,” replied Jim

“Ok,” replied the king. So as Jim told them how to make electricity.

The next day the royal people let Jim go if he could push a rock off a cliff. It took three long nights but he did it. As quick as a snap, he was back at Chessington!

He found in a heap of dirt and the doctor said

“You have been under Earth having your own adventure,”

“Wow,” said Jim. No doubt Jim will be able to make electricity but also go adventuring again soon!

Trapped Underground

SF - Year 6

“Help” screamed Aimie suddenly she realised she was stuck because a pipe had burst underground. On the main road of meopham. She was petrified. But no one could hear her because the mud had fallen on top of her.

“Ouch what’s that something is digging into my back?” so as Aimie turned around she saw a pipe was dug in her back. So she had an idea she yanked the pipe out of the ground and tried to whack the ground above her.

She sat there for 30 minutes trying and trying but it did not work. She tried screaming again she screamed “help me help me can anybody hear me?” suddenly a policeman called paddy said to a policewomen called Sandra “did you hear something?”

“Yes I did” said Sandra.

“It seems like it is coming from the hole” said paddy. So they went to check it out. They dug and dug and eventually got to aimie.they helped her out and took her home aimie thought she was gone for ages but she was only gone 5 minutes.

Singing in the Secret World

TE - Year 6

Feeling unsure of what lay ahead, Tochi, Chantelle and Chioma approached the secret world. “This reminds me of the wizard of OZ, but how did we get here?”

Suddenly a crowd of people appeared. Apprehensive of what to say, Chantelle said “don’t worry we mean no harm.”

The people showed the girls their world. “You have hospitals, supermarkets and your own stage… but where are your singers?”

“We do not have singers” explained one person “we are not talented singers.”

His glum, sorrowful face instantly turned to a cheerful face.

“I’ve a spectacular idea, why don’t you be are singers?” he said pleadingly

“Well…” said Chioma

“Oh just for one show?” He said

“Ok” said Chantelle

That night the girls sang their hearts out. The crowd went wild, they even wanted an encore!

After the show the girls said they needed to go.

“Don’t go!” said a girl

“But we have to” said Tochi

The leader said that if they want to go home they need to drink the bottle, if they want to come back again drink again. They drank the bottle and returned home.

“What an adventure” Chioma said.

Only sometimes they made surprise performances

What's Behind the Door?

LP - Year 6

Ali stood silently, looking at the door. With a slow creaking sound, it opened. Taking a deep breath, Ali walked inside. It was almost pitch black. Ali groped around so as not to lose the door and, mercifully, managed to grab hold of the handle. It was cold as ice. Ali felt a bolt of chill surge through him. It was still dark. In the inky gloom, Ali wasn’t even sure if his eyes were open or shut. It wouldn’t have mattered. He wrapped his arms around himself, trying to keep warm. After a few moments, his eyes started to adjust. He found he was in a long hall with a set of stairs at the far end. He found an old cracked mirror and examined himself. The Ali looking back at him was as deathly pale as his olive-skin would go, and his pupils had dilated so much that his dark brown irises were hardly visible. He saw ornaments shaped like dragons and monsters and gargoyles behind him. Then, out of the corner of his eye, he saw something that made him turn round. A trail of fresh footprints was clearly seen in the settled carpet of untouched dust, leading to a small door under the stairs. With a mounting sense of dread, Ali lifted his hand and pushed the door open.

The Luckiest Boy on Earth

MP - Year 6

"Yes!" exclaimed Izzy as she threw a snowball at her best friend Matt. It was snowing heavily in Devon were they both lived. The snow, which was starting to melt, made them dissapointed. Running quickly, Matt started to realise something. The snow was getting deeper by the minute! He was sinking in snow! He could feel his plump cheeks burning with worry. He was travelling downwards and downwards, The snow never ended! Something or someone clasped his ankle pulling him down. "Hello little boy" said a soft and sweet voice Welcome Alien!" "Im not an alien, Im a boy! "Well are you ready to be the... LUCKIEST BOY ON EARTH! "Huh?" Matt said confused. " Quick, Quick eat as much bubblegum on the count of 3!" "Wait but where am I?" He exclaimed sharpley "Just wait and see!"... He was in a room with bubblegum everywhere! On the ceiling, On the floor. BUZZZ went a buzzer everyone started eating bubblegum so matt copied.After, he explored the world he had visited, 100 floors of sweets! Just then he started to melt and he ended back home! "What an adventure!" Molly looked confused.

Hide and Seek on a Strange Planet

CH - Year 6

"Lets play a game of hide and seek in the woods!" suggested Becky. "Ok, but don't go too far!" warned her big brother. "I know!" she said rolling her eyes. "Yeah, okay sis. You go hide and I'll count," he said giving her a push. Becky ran into the woods to hide. She found a pile of leaves, dived into them and lay perfectly still. Suddenly she saw a bright pulsating light, which surrounded her,and hypnotically transported her to another place. After some time, Becky found herself on a strange planet, somehow breathing oxygen. "Where am I?" she asked looking at Earth in the distance. Suddenly, a big, hairy monster jumped out at her. Then came another... and another. "I'm Bog," said one, "This is Mog and Gog." "Take me home!" pleaded Becky. "Maybe. But only if you give us food!" said Bog. Scared, Becky pulled out some chocolate from her pocket. Bog gave her a mini spaceship to get home. "Drive carefully!" he said. "Bye!" chorused Mog and Gog. Becky waved at them and took off into space. Unfortunately, she landed on the wrong planet. Monsters appeared from all directions. "I hope they like chocolate!" she thought.

Bubble and Gum

EJ - Year 6

‘‘It’s so tight in here.’’ I told bubble, my sister. “I know gum but we’ll be out soon.” She promised, and as if by magic we started to lift up, and travelled forward. “Ouch!!” Bubble moaned pitifully. We heard a loud cling! And suddenly we were travelling again. The terrifying mess we were trapped in started to peel off, then two fat, peach chunks strongly gripped my sides and started to squeeze. Suddenly I found myself being lifted, high in the sky I squealed with joy despite the uncomfortable felling on my sides. Then everything went black……………. “Ha, ha, ha, ha!” I yelled, laughing. (I was at that moment being tickled by rocks in the dark) “How strange it is in here.” I said to myself. Then a large gap opened, I felt cold air push on my back, stretching me. “Huh?” I wondered, the air came faster and faster. I started to stretch...Stretch...Stretch…and stretch some more until I was out of the hole, bigger than it even. Then suddenly POP!

Where was the Door?

AF - Year 6

It was getting closer. I could feel its presence poisoning the still night air. What should I do? I didn’t know. Then, quite suddenly, there was a noise. I forced myself to believe that it was my parents, coming to rescue me from this sinister nightmare, but, deep inside, I knew very well that it wasn’t. I whipped round to face the door. The door? Come to think of it, where was the door? It was then that a horrible thought struck me. A thought that made my blood turn as cold as marble. There wasn’t a door. With a sharp pang, I realized that I was trapped.

I Heard Footsteps

JB - Year 6

It was silent. I felt anxious and afraid, my poor heart pounded like a steel drum. Knowing the halls were usually bright, bold and crowded confused me deeply as now they were dark, cold and empty. Cold tears ran down my cheek. The headmaster’s door came closer and closer, my stomach churned and spun like a washing machine. My steps echoed in the deserted corridor, my breath was like a lions roar. Suddenly I heard footsteps…..........

Ringggggggg!

Finally.

The Killer Drop

KP - Year 6

“JUMP!” screamed Elliott, as Jake approached Killer, the sheer drop which dominated the forest. “Where should I jump too?” shouted Jake as he neared the Killer. “Jump to the rocks!” Elliott bellowed as he jumped of his bike and ran towards Jake. Elliott skidded to a halt beside Jake before grabbing his hand and pulling him out of the raging rapids. “Thanks,” murmured Jake as he looked down at the Killer.

“Wow! Look how steep it is!” gasped Elliott.

“AAAAHHHHHHH!” screamed the two boys as Peter, the neighbourhood bully, pushed them down the Killer. “We are going to die!” shouted Jake as he was flying through the air. “Think positive!” bellowed Elliott. The two boys fell to their doom. “Why haven’t we landed yet?” screamed Jake.

“I have no idea!” said Elliott, confused with the logic. Elliott and Jake fell for what felt like days before hitting solid ground. “Ouch!” groaned the two 11 year olds as they hit the ground. “Where are we? It looks like china!” assumed Jake as he looked around….

The Lion was Behind Me

LT - Year 6

The car screeched to a halt soaring through the air and landing with a crash. Wondering what to do next , I jumped out. Stepping into the freshness of the grass and the roarness of the tree bark. Monkeys swinging from tree to tree, elephants thumping around and at the top of a hill, a LION, with fire coloured hair and googly eyes, the lion started to scratch the ground looking as if it was about to charge. Within a split second I dashed behind a tree wondering if the mad animal had saw. I peeked around knowing that the lion might catch sight, and it did. It started sprinting towards me like a wild blood hound. I didn't know what to do, so, I started scurrying up the tree like a demented squirrel leaving scratch marks behind me. But little did I realise, THE LION WAS BEHIND ME. There was no where to go, he was going to get me. He went for my leg, leaving a chunk out of it, I yelped out in pain, but the next thing I heard was "Libby wake up you're going to be late for school ". What an adventure.

My Mini Universe

CO - Year 6

What an adventure! I was lying in bed and I looked at the clock, it showed 1:30 I wanted to go to sleep but I just couldn't. I don't know why but it was just impossible. Suddenly the ground started to shake and a purple circle appeared on the floor. I jumped onto it to see if it would disappear but instead it sucked me in! I only heard my mams last words 'stop banging, 'and by that time I was gone. I ended up in a new world universe where I was really small, I was nearly squashed by people's feet! That day I was a mini human causing a terrible amount of trouble! The only problem was is that it wasn't me. Suddenly I heard a clatter of feet storming after me and before I got a chance to run a large heavy foot stood on me. When I opened my eyes I was staring at my bedroom ceiling. 'What a adventure!' I exclaimed!

The Greatest Adventurist Ever

JF - Year 6

What an adventure. The sun set behind the trees in the distance. It was late afternoon maybe about five o’clock at night. Other than the cawing birds, everywhere was quiet ,the silence was broken and a rusty military helicopter flew overhead. Inside lay possibly the greatest adventurist ever, Jim. He had just been to the Amazon, on his latest adventure to recover the Golden Book. Jim had risked everything he had to recover the book, he had been attacked by loads of wild animals. Jim had three big holes in his leg where an anaconda had savaged him, he now had a cold flannel over his face. The pilot was a old British man who could drive any vehicle. Out of the blue a loud churning noise started coming from the propellers, one of the propellers snapped clean off and went tumbling down towards the jungle. The helicopter lurched forward towards the dense jungle. Startled, Jim woke up and quickly took the co-pilot seat. The helicopter came crashing through the trees scaring loads of monkeys. A group of minibuses drove towards them with tourists onboard, they were going to the airport and they had two spare seats to share.

Bombs were Everywhere

ES - Year 6

What an adventure Lying on the sofa flat out watching TV with my mate Billy, unexpectedly my head started to spin. When it came to stop everything was gloomy and Billy was wearing a grey scratchy cap and a gloomy school uniform ,much different to what he usually wears! I looked outside. A thick layer of rubble lay across the ground .Rooftops Crumbled. I ran down stairs and staggered outside. The street was motionless no on in Sight!! "Where are you going! Are you crazy! There's bombs going off everywhere, " he called. "Watch out" Billy screamed. The next thing I knew I was flat out on the ground once more. "How did you get down there you were on the Sofa a minute ago" he giggled. What an adventure!!!

The Swarm of Wasps

NS - Year 6

There we were me and James running through the dense Amazonian Jungle, when the faint sound of Buzzing caught our attention “What’s that?” said James quietly, we looked around as it got louder and louder “RUN!” I shouted, we ran and ducked under some logs as the biggest swarm of wasps were flying over us! The wasps had finally gone, it had took about a minute before they all passed “What was that about?” I asked “I have no idea” James replied “A swarm of wasps that big wouldn’t just fly like that, would they?” I asked “I don’t know” James replied, the ground was starting to shake every second suddenly it stopped, there it was again! “It’s getting louder!” James said “Much louder” I replied, behind us a tree fell down, nothing small could do that. We walked over, it hadn’t been cut down more like wrenched out the roots and all! Its starting again, a huge shape appeared behind us coming at amazing speed! “RUN” I yelled, we ran towards a waterfall, and hid in a small cave were we camped for the night! What an adventure!

The Man who Chased Me

NJ - Year 6

I gasped for breath as I looked behind and was thrilled to find that the man wasn’t chasing me. Without thinking, I quickly got out my phone and called my school, telling them that I won’t be able to attend today because of an appointment. I thought that they were curious; I loved school and they know that my mother would have postponed the appointment so I won’t miss my schooling, they might think it’s probably for medical reasons. But what about my mother? Won’t she be shocked if the school phoned and reported I hadn’t shown up for registration? My heart thumped faster that day and I could feel it, like a drum. Despite all the questions in my mind, I was most curious about the man who chased me. I sat on the train and tried to think of what I should do, but I had a stomach ache and I felt nervous anytime a man who is poorly dressed walks past me. As the train approached the station, I felt really peculiar as I could see that same man, but this time he came and grabbed me. Consequently my life, as I knew it, had changed forever.

Our Camping Trip

Z - Year 6

"Dad dad are you ready for our camping trip?" screamed Holly "yes just wait one minute i'm getting my bag" he replied "ok" she said When they got in the car Jhon (dad) and Holly set off for their journey. "bags, check, water,check, all the things we need, check" said Holly. As soon as they arrived Holly and Jhon looked for a place to camp. They finally found a nice part of ground with alot of space. "Look at this dad we have found a really good place to camp, now lets make a fire so, we need some wood" Jhon and Holly finally got their fire done and sat down with their hot meal and water. Because Holly was so very hungry from the journey. She ate all of her dinner up like she'd never before. Holly and Jhon heared something in the distance and darkness they wondered what it was but they couldn't leave everything to go and explore, so they forgot about it and fell asleep. When they woke up in the morning some of their stuff had disapeared. They went out to explore and find out where their things had gone but they couldn't see anything. Holly got scared at this moment so she wanted to go home her dad gave into her and said "ok" They never knew what happend and they probably never will!...

I Heard Burglars

AN - Year 6

I awakened to the eeriness of my old, spooky bedroom. My throat was raw and dry. I decided to go and get a drink. Delicately, I tip-toed down the groaning stairs… it felt as if they were stopping me from venturing down them. Maybe there was something down there… A silhouetted shadow danced passed the curtains, as an amazing moonbeam slanted through the house, the stars and the moon smiling in delight of the beautiful night. I heard a noise. Some sort of clambering, then a cackle. A man, wait, two, in black, stripy clothing and balaclavas. Burglars! “No, it couldn’t be; should I run? No wait, I’ll follow them!” I whispered to the stars. Just my luck, though, they heard me. A tall, dark man with a deep voice pulled me viciously into a large sack. I heard them chuckling at me, and I knew I should get out. They threw the sack into which felt like a car boot… everything started to spin… I woke up terrified. Where was I? Where had they taken me? But, I recognised the ceiling. I was back in my bedroom, my lovely bedroom. Wow, I thought… What an adventure!

Caught by the Dead at Midnight

LB - Year 6

As she had absolutely nothing else to do that night Eliza went for a walk all around her block. She strolled down her road (Lodger Road) – followed by a hike all the way up the precipitous hill of Grand avenue. A few minutes later she progressed to the top of that hill. Suddenly, she reached the graveyard...

Eliza had an outlandish feeling that someone or something. All Eliza had was her dog Scruffs and an antique lantern. She looked back but saw nothing however she did catch a glimpse of skeletal hand slip behind the corner...

It was getting late (two minutes to midnight in fact) “Oh Scruffs I’m so scared!” said Eliza picking Scruffs up to stroke him. So, bravely, Eliza decided to take the shortcut-through the graveyard...

All of a sudden-a cold bony-fingered hand touch her shoulder. She looked and stood behind her was a Skeleton. Then he spoke “You must follow me!” declared the skeleton. Being extremely petrified, Eliza obeyed the skeleton.

The next morning when her mother called her down for breakfast there was no answer, so her mum went up to Eliza’s Room however there was no-one there...

What Lies Ahead

AB - Year 6

Anxiously edging of the precipice of the helicopter, I suddenly felt in a state of panic! Then, the cacophonous drone of rotor blades buzzed in my ears! As I timidly steadied myself… I LEAPED out!!!!!!!!! Falling to the sodden grass below, my life flashed before my eyes…… As I hit the ground with a heavy thud, I stared at the dense forest ahead of me…… Slowly trembling through the boggy trenches, a smell of one thousand corpses invaded my nostrils! When suddenly, a faint rustle echoed in the wind. With no idea of where to go, I ventured into the unknown! Constantly peering from left to right, I saw nothing but the bare scenery of trees and mud. However, all of a sudden, a deep dark cave was pictured into the corner of my eye! As I hastily advanced to the gloomy cave of darkness, a cold shiver ran down my shrivelled up spine! Then more noises started from left to right, up and down. Thinking that my mind was playing tricks on me, I bravely strided forward. Stepping into the dreary damp void, I was gripped with an over whelming sense of fear! WHERE WAS I!!!!!!! WHAT LIES AHEAD………!!!!

The Concealed Tomb

CH - Year 6

I never thought my holiday to Egypt could get any stranger until... Whilst I was blissfully strolling though the torrid plains of the Egyptian desert, I heard a suspicious sound coming from the howling wind- I felt terribly confused, almost petrified. My heart stopped with fear; I then knew the anonymous voice was the wind trying to say something to me. Perhaps it was a special message from god or just the scorching weather which is making me hear things. “I need you to find the hidden tomb far, far into the depths of the desert, this is so vital to me, so if you don’t do it, it might cost you your life,” commanded the mysterious whisper from the wind. So that night, I went into the blazing desert to find this concealed tomb. All of a sudden, it started to get extremely dark- I wasn’t sure if I could have found my way through Fortunately, I finally found what I was after the tomb! But then I heard such a cacophonous scream, it made me wonder what was there. Obviously, I went to investigate what was happening. Then I discovered why. And the girl was never seen again...

Is There Really Nothing There

CP - Year 6

Through the dark haze of the forest, a dark shadowy silhouette crept slowly tree to tree. In the corner of my eye, the distant forest exit faded mysteriously. Suddenly, a scurry of paws and feet lurked in the convoluted undergrowth. At that very moment, an aroma of a thousand corps invaded my sensitive nostrils. Accidently, I fell into a cobweb as a small tickle of spider’s legs advanced down my arm. Swiping it off, I carried on my way. Without warning, a cold bony hand covered my screeching mouth… Then-I heard another deaf-defying scream as my weary head went blank… When I awoke, I was laid on the damp forest floor. Noticed, a long cut ran along my arm as a trail of blood drops ran along into the night of the forest…Looking up I saw a black mare with deep green eyes boring down into me. As I brushed of my leaf-covered body, I rode it into the dancing moonlight that amalgamated together in the light of the full moon. After that, a path of deep red blood led to a dark cloaked silhouette lying hidden. Vampire teeth were showing and dripping with blood.

The Suspicious House Next Door

GR - Year 6

There was something suspicious about the house next door, Charlie new that. He was determined to find out what. Despite the gloomy look that hid behind the extensive must brown curtains, Charlie was courageously planning to creep into the house at midnight.

Mid night had come. Charlie had packed his bag and was creeping cautiously towards the amide of the dark shilohate. He pulled open the plank if warn away wood~ used as a door. Inside the house, there was lots of strange machinery. He peered outside the window and was surprised to see the grass towering way above the upstairs window!

Then, as he crept upstairs, one of the floor boards suddenly demolished! The stranger who lived there came running to see what had woken him up. He tugged the boy and tied a huge rope, tying him to the banester……..

The Two Spies

AW - Year 6

“Come here Bob I’ve found something,” Taaj told his companion Bob Hopkins. “What ‘ave you found.” Bob asked “I’ve got good news and bad news. The good news is I’ve found the house however there’s dozens of bodyguards.” Taaj said. “Let’s go into the house,” “Yup”. Replied Bob Bob and Taaj both worked for MI9. Bob was from Bradford and Taaj was from the east end of London. Bob was a strong man with arithmetic talents. Where as Taaj didn’t even have any GCSE’s but was a master at combat, with weapons and with his own hands They set off towards the criminal’s house. Taaj took the leading roll and shot all the bodyguards with his Ak-47. As they ran into the house Bob called “its MI9. Come down now.” “OK, OK I’m coming down” the man said. As he came down the two spies handcuffed the man. Taaj told Bob “I’ve seen this guy before robbing a bank. Oh that was an adventure but this one is better we’ve been after this guy for decades now we’ve got him.” “Aha.” Bob said.

The Tears of Happiness

RV - Year 6

“I couldn’t believe it, my favourite uncle has just died and all he’s given me is a horrible boring poem.” I muttered under my breath. “Come on Calypso; cheer up, stop being so sour. I know you’re upset. Do you want to come with me to tidy up you’re uncles attic?” Mum says nicely (to make me feel better). But of course, it’s not working. When we were there I stropped behind my Mum. I saunter into the house that smells of freshly planted lavender. I go up to the attic to bring a box down but while I’m there see my favourite book and I open it, it wasn’t it was just an illusion. It was the other half of the poem I got it out of my pocket and put them together. It said: I’m still alive my child, If you cry the tears of happiness I will appear. I cried onto the poem, but it wasn’t wet. My uncle appeared. He said “I cried onto the poem and I got trapped in it. Everyone thought I was dead.” Then he went. I landed in my kitchen. I saw a silhouette. It was him.

Grandma and the Loch Ness Monster

RG - Year 6

Rise and fall I am Maria. I am twelve; fairly tall for my age and have black hair and sea green eyes. The Isle of Skye, where I live is probably the most amazingly beautiful place to live in the entire world! I look at my Grandma and wonder what goes on in her brain; she seems oblivious to everything that goes on around her, no matter how important it seems to us. Today we are going to Loch Ness. We drive down narrow, winding roads until we reach our destination. My grandma says she will go shopping, so I wander over to the Loch and start taking photos to put in my scrap book. I first saw it in the distance, but it seemed to creep closer to me, (like a paper clip to a magnet). I think it is the Loch Ness Monster, but I can’t be sure. I wobble; then fall into the murky green water, only to be scooped up by my mystery sea serpent. I rose and then I fell, back into the Loch. On the way home I look back to see my Monster grinning at me, I grinned back.

The Parrallel Worlds

HJ - Year 6

As Tommy dragged his legs out of his school his mother was bringing his usual chocolate bar: can of coke and a lolly pop to him. Tommy plunked his bag on his mother as if she were a trolley then snatched his food out of his mother’s hands. Yet as he lifted his hand (the one holding his chocolate) his stomach started to tug however, nothing was going to stop him from having his food. Suddenly, his body got the sensation that he was melting away then? “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh what do you think you’re doing?” called a strong, angry Irish voice that turned out to be a lolly pop (the sweet) man riding on a chocolate bar with coke can wheels. “Turning from parallel world to parallel world like that, you could of smushed me!” After along time of deep breaths and paracetamol Aaron (Irish) calmed down and explained that Tommy wasnt fat and he was here to be taught a lesson. So after a lot of crying Tommy found himself outside on the liquorice roads then in his pocket he found a banana, Tommy hated bananas yet as he ate it he felt a tug in his gut.

The Beginning of Blazing Beard the Pirate

JP - Year 6

“Board the ship” shouted weird beard, the East India Trading Company merchant ship pulled up along the Raider. Blazing Beard had been sailing down between Madagascar and Mozambique when he saw the Essence. He had hoped it was carrying valuable gold and jewels. Most merchants that travelled from Africa would be carrying these valuables. The Raider moved to the side, cannons blazing. A cannon ball blew a massive hole in the side of the Essence. Almost immediately pirates boarded, among them was Blazing beard himself he had set his beard on fire. The Essences crew were massacred on the spot or taken prisoner. Blazing beard broke down the door to the cargo he found gold and silver plus diamonds despite all the glorious riches he was more interested in a parchment on an old battered barrel. It was a treasure map to an unknown island. It looked amazing. When he got back on his ship he ordered his men to set sail to this unknown place of wonder. He sailed into the distance thinking of this wonder.

Luke's Story

HB - Year 6

Luke was sitting in his new home and he was resting after haling everything in from the car still he new that he had to do the attic after tea. During tea he decided to try and get the piano up the ladder to the attic. After tea he stepped up the ladder to see the space in the attic and his jaw dropped because he saw a cupboard and the strange thing with this cupboard was it changed shape. He stepped towards the cupboard and opened it inside was a piece of paper. On that piece of paper was written. Look in the garden and scream. Ps Mind the step! Luke froze and then he ran down the ladder threw the hall into the kitchen and out the back door and he froze all he saw a wheelbarrow and in the wheelbarrow was another letter and a shovel he read the letter Dig! Then he digged and digged until he saw a medal and Luke walked inside and continued to do the new house.

My Storyland Wish

IH - Year 6

Jeremy Dobbs came gallumphing down the stairs clutching a moth-eaten blanket. "Jeremy, what on earth have you been doing?" his mother asked. Jeremy took a huge gulp of air ... "Well I was playing with my toy soldiers when a massive pink and green monster came and ate teddy so I fighted it and all its blood and guts spilled on the floor all slimy and gooey and then a fairy appeared with a wand and said well done you killed the monster you are now king and you have one wish for whatever you want in the whole of storyland." Jeremy's face grew redder and redder! "Well, what an adventure Jeremy, but whatever did you wish for?" Jeremy blushed and stared at the carpet shuffling his feet. "I wish I could write better sentences!" he said, with an exclamation mark!

Deserted in Space

RH - Year 6

James dozed of into a dream. He appeared to be floating around in space. “How could a boy be in space?” asked James. A galaxy in the distance caught his eye for the moment - it looked like the Milky Way, So he decided to check it out. He landed. James has always fought that this particular galaxy was chocolate. But this was obviously because it has the same name as his favourite chocolate bar in the world. Not knowing that it wasn’t his favourite chocolate bar, James ripped a Part of the Milky Way and started chewing it. “Ughhh that is so disgusting” yelled James, spiting the sour taste out of his mouth. Tilting backwards, James fell of the substantial galaxy. Drifting down through the cold air ,James nearly died. Something zoomed underneath him. He gazed down to see what it was. It was a Caribbean blue surfing board. Surfing is his favourite sport so he thought it was really cool. 5 minutes later. Next a alien zoomed beside him. James knew this alien. It was alien Sarg. He thought this will go on forever but unworthily it didn’t. James fell of his bed…

Creatures in the Library

NKS - Year 6

Bella woke up, feeling full of energy. She threw on her clothes and ate some breakfast. She set off to the library.

As she walked in the library, she heard some strange noises. She ignored them and walked up the stairs; she steped in the room and froze because out of the corner of her eye she saw the most hideous, dreadful creatures the vampires. She slowly started to pace back but they already surrounded her. They came closer and closer she had no escape as they were about to suck her blood she realized it was only a dream.

Being Prime Minister

AY - Year 6

What an adventure....... One dark evening, Amy was sleeping. She started dreaming. In her dream she had the world to herself as she was voted prime minister. She was confused. She didn’t remember being part of the election. She was in her office, Lilly entered the room and Amy asked her who was she? Lilly said she was her assistant. Amy was surprised. Amy had to go to lots of meetings. When she came back from the meeting she was exhausted! Lilly brought some lunch for Amy so she had more energy. Out side Amy’s window people where shouting Russia! Amy stepped out side. Every body was silent so Amy could talk. Amy was frightened. She hit her head on the headboard. Her mum came in the room. Amy saw the time and dashed out of the room to start another ordinary day.

At the Bus Stop

MK - Year 6

Wednesday 12 of December Ashley was about to go to work at 9.00pm but she saw a bus driving past her, so she decided to go to the bus stop. Ashley stood next to the bus stop and there was a man with a black hair and a black cloak. The man was looking at her. Ashley said “What are you looking at?” The man stuck his tongue at her and showed his bright, white, long teeth... Ashley started to be really, really scared. She started to ran away but the man touched her shoulder. Ashley thought “Ohhh dumn he got me hmm what should I do!!” Ashley saw her BF walking past. Katie yelled “What are you doing with my friend?!” but suddenly Ashley and her friend turned around and the man disappeared. Her friend was shocked about that. “I didn’t know what to do” said Ashley. The bus came and she finally went to work.2.00pm Ashley and her friend are going home Ashley’s friend going home with her because she is too scared of her. “I’m your friend I can” leave you. But Ashley heard a noisy sound but her friend didn’t …whoo!!.

The Elms Revenge

FW - Year 6

“Bed time John” shouted mother. John crept inside bed. He grabbed a drink and then went of into a doze. He woke up and found himself on the lush grass. “Elms leader where shall we go to attack” said one of the elms. “We shall march to Zergo Island” replied John. John got on the car and drove to the island. “Up ahead” yelled elm number 253. They drew there swords and the battle commenced. “Never give up don’t surrender” John encouraged the elms. John slit the throat of one of the orcs and went to takedown Zergo. He darted to the roof of the 30 foot tower and found the orc leader. John sliced and diced Zergo and shoved him of the tower. Zergo was dead. “We are victorious” said elm number 53. John woke up. It was a dream. “What an adventure” said John

The Beach Holiday

DM - Year 6

Isabelle woke up and got ready to go on holiday she ran down stairs and got her drawing set. Then ran back up stairs to gets three pillows and her quilt. She woke her mum and dad up and said to them wake up were holiday .Her mum and dad said yeah were getting up don’t worry. Isabelle started to cry her mum and dad got changed and put everything in the car and started to drive. Isabelle got her drawing stuff out and started to draw. She drew it just like the beach that she is going to. It took two hours to get there. They finely got there Isabelle saw her best friend Bella she got out the car and ran to her. Isabelle walk with her best friend Bella out of nowhere someone was following them both they looked back and they started to run away. Bella got her phone out and called the police the police came and took Amy and Denno got arrested for chasing them both. Isabelle and Bella started to laugh and ran back to Isabelle’s mum and dad and went in the tent and went to laughed and they fall asleep…

The Food Store

JR - Year 6

Aaron Moor was out hunting, searching desperately for food to feed his hungry family. The food that Laman, the capital, provided was barely enough and the whole city was starving. Aaron took a step forward, tracking a young deer. . . And the ground crumbled beneath him. Aaron looked around. ‘Where am I?’ he whispered. He was in a cavern with an opening in the wall. It led on to a passageway. He ducked in to the opening and walked down the passage. At the end there was a door that was slightly ajar. Aaron opened the door a little more and stepped into a room. He looked around and saw the room was a kitchen full of food. Aaron grinned and stuffed his sack and pockets with tins and packets before running down the passage and into the cavern. Now he looked closer, he realised there was a ladder leaning against the wall. He jumped up the ladder and sprinted home. It turned out that Aaron uncovered a regularly-stocked food store for the people of Laman. Every week, Aaron and a few others would take about half of the goods to feed Panem and the whole city thrived again.

Memory Lane

SR - Year 6

As silent tears rolled down my cheeks, I continued to walk down the dark, never-ending alleyway. Quick as a flash, blinding lights came that swept me off my feet. They vanished as quickly as they came, leaving me paralysed with shock, in a place which was unfamiliar, yet so familiar. I seemed mesmerised in a strange tranquil state, stranded in a parallel universe. Instantly, I scrutinized my surroundings apprehensively, realising it was time to take a dreaded trip down Memory Lane. I looked around my memories, my head spinning. It was exciting, starting a train of flashbacks and realising I had the opportunity to change the future, to get my family back. It was the town’s 100^th anniversary; it was fun until a bomb went off. This time, I knew terrorists were planting a bomb secretly. I warned the mayor, and the building was evacuated, everyone safe, including my family. I felt at peace knowing that I will have my family. Suddenly, bright lights and cold wind blew me to present time. I rushed down the alleyway, knowing that my loving family will be waiting for me, not knowing how my adventure has changed their lives.

The Talking Animals

FM - Year 6

Mesmerised by the lifelike animals, Daisy suddenly shouted worriedly “Wait there is something moving!” daisy realised that the animals on Splash Mountain were moving. Daisy’s family didn’t believe her. She was sure the animals moved. Suddenly out of the blue they stared to go the wrong way. Daisy was so terrified she screamed “Were going to crash!” suddenly there was a big port hole. Daisy was so scared and confused she closed her eyes. Before she knew it she was through. On the other side there were talking animals. Daisy and her family didn’t know what was going to happen. Suddenly one of the animals came up to Daisy and her family and said “Hello my name is Poppy. Are you lost? ”and Daisy replied “Hello Poppy, my name is Daisy and we are trying to get back to Disneyland.” Then poppy looked surprised and said “Well why didn’t you say so! There is a machine right over there that will take you back” “Ok thank you Poppy.” As Daisy was running towards the machine. And as the family were going back to Disneyland, Daisy said to herself “What an adventure.”

The Magical Garden

JM - Year 6

“Help” Screamed Griffin, realising he was sinking. “Help” he screamed again as the branch began to get smaller. His garden was magical. Griffin was underground, but he wasn’t scared. There was a huge base, he waked in. There was known one was there. It looked like animals worked there. Griffin yelled “is anyone there!” there was no answer. Suddenly he heard a siren, lots of heavy foot steps then a brigade of badgers came. Griffin dived behind a rock. He saw the badgers sit down. Then one dropped their pencil and looked behind and saw him. “Who are you” said badger #21 “come with me ill get you cleaned up” “Ok” replied griffin .they both sneaked out “so what are you doing here?” “We have been captured.” “Why don’t you escape?” “Tomorrow, be there” Tomorrow

They snuck past the guard Griffin used the 5 finger freeze. They threw a stone to distract the boss as badger 21# dug through the wall finally they were through but there was no way out. Griffin hit the tree route in anger then the ground started to shake and a hole opened up They both clambered out. The ground shock, then everyone came out.

The Green Troll Temple

ED - Year 6

“I don’t remember that being there.” Said Christopher cautiously, while he was playing hide and seek in the forest. When he walked through the mysterious tunnel he saw a bright light coming from the other side. On the other side of the tunnel there were tall trolls with nobly feet. Before Christopher could escape a troll grabbed hold of him and ran towards the temple. When they were at the temple the troll dropped Christopher onto the stone floor. “Let me go back!” He shouted to the troll. “You must help us!” answered the green troll. Suddenly, the queen of the temple appeared. “Christopher, once you find the golden crown you will be set free from this world,” said the queen. Christopher searched all over the kingdom for the crown but it was nowhere to be seen. That night Christopher decided to look for the crown and while he was walking he saw something in-between the trees. “It’s the crown.” He whispered. He struggled up the tree but finally he reached the crown. He took it safely back to the queen and he was blessed dearly. Christopher ran back home to his father safely and he thought “What an Adventure.”

The Undersea Lights

TR - Year 6

Rodney was excited about going fishing in Ireland. Then they hired a boat and headed out to sea. Then as soon as Rodney threw in his bait he caught a fish and shouted, “Dad, help me! I think I’ve got a huge fish!” Suddenly Rodney got pulled into the sea but he could breathe without any equipment. Then, in a split second the fish was on the move again. Rodney just realised that the fish was heading for a light in the distance. As the fish got nearer the light Rodney started to see more and more lights, then more fish Rodney tried to cut the string with his teeth but it didn’t work. So then Rodney started to pull the string towards him. As the fish was coming towards him the other fish came at him. Rodney reacted fast and unhooked the fish and quickly swam up to the surface. His dad’s boat wasn’t far so Rodney swam to the boat climbed on the boat and headed back to shore his dad didn’t even notice that Rodney was gone in the end they headed back to shore. When he went home his mum wondered why Rodney was all wet.

The Broken Ride

BB - Year 6

Feeling worried, Danny shouted “The boat has broken down” He was on the ride The Splash Mountain in Disneyland Paris. Danny then tried to stop near some land and climb so he could call for some help. When he found some land and gasped “Help” some people that where flowing by were trying to help him but they couldn’t. Danny was so worried because he didn’t think he would get home. Then the owners could see Danny in the camera and the owners got into a boat and they go and get. Danny and he wanted to finish off the ride so he did with the owners. When he got off he decided to go home so off he went back home.

Dreams

JF - Year 6

I was deep in a whirl of dreams, my eyes sealed shut. A cold wisp of breath tingled against my cheek; a shudder fell down my body. I was awake but yet my eyes were not opening. I struggled to breathe however eventually oxygen filled my lungs. My eyes started to open, something landed on my legs. I panicked “what is going on?” I thought. Finally I was able to see, a face appeared before me, I started to scream yet no sound could be heard. Its eyes were deep with sadness and it brought thoughts to me sadness overriding all happiness. when the face realised that I was watching it , it fled out of my door then it dropped something, I was going to go and retrieve it but as soon as I went to get up I dropped back onto my pillow and fell down into my dreams once again. I awoke once more yet this time it was morning I glanced over to the door and lying beside it was a piece of paper it read: remember this if I get your soul your memories thoughts and dreams will be as dark as coal!

The Crypt

CL - Year 6

Sam Sandy was an eleven year old boy who lived in a mansion with his parents in York. He was watching TV when he noticed a small note pinned to the fireplace. It read: Hello Sam. There are a lot of mysteries in this house, but I'm willing to tell you one. Press the "heat" button on your fireplace and you will find the e... The rest of the letter was ripped off. Sam read the letter several times before he pressed the button. The fireplace hummed and screeched for a moment until a doorknob appeared. Cautiously, he reached out and pulled the doorknob which revealed a giant tunnel. Another note was stuck onto the side of the fireplace. It read: Please enter. Sam hesitated before he crawled into the tunnel. The tunnel lead to a small baron room lit by fire that flickered all around the room. Another note was taped to a large block of stone in the middle of the room. It read: Welcome to the crypt...and your doom! All of a sudden a pair of red eyes peered down the tunnel and into the crypt.

The Beach from Hell

TC - Year 6

I walked casually down the steep rocky road to the sandy beach. My feet touched the boiling sand and I ran to the sea to cool them down. We spent all day there, we had a great time but towards the end of the day I saw something shining from under a huge rock. I went to see what it was. I saw it was a tiny emerald at first I didn’t realise what it was so I put my hand out hesitantly and touched it then suddenly there was a big glow. It said in a Scottish accent “If I am broken you will pay with you most valued item”! 5 years later “Georgina stop running around our mansion” “Never Tom” “Don’t nock the emerald; noooooooo”. Then suddenly Georgina turned to dust and the emerald said while glowing “I warned you and you have paid the price”!

The Whale in the Desert

LK - Year 6

The scorching sun burnt my face, like fire with plastic. In the Sahara desert, the only way to survive is water. We have been travelling for eleven days now, and we still haven’t found a trace of the treasure… “CRASH!” there was a loud, surprising thud in the distance, and it made us jump higher than a frog. We got very suspicious, so we decided to investigate. After all, there hasn’t been much movement since the last century that we’ve been here anyway, and we were getting bored. We are at the heart of the mystery. We found a massive whale! I felt very sorry for the breathless whale, and wondered who on earth did have such a barbarous idea. I was looking at the whale, when a note caught my eye. It was stuck to the whale’s belly. It said, “Dear reader, I am the mummy of the pyramids, and I command you to stop searching. If you deny my command, all the animals shall die. Soon after, it shall be YOU that dies! Signed, Anonymous Five years later… “Ring! Ring!” the phone was ringing. “Ring! Ring!” but there was no-one to answer it.

The Riddle Breaker

WD - Year 6

“Roll up roll up” shouted the man at the stall. “Get a very nice set of draws for just 㱰” “Just 㱰 that’s well cheap can we get it dear? “Of course darling it’s beautiful” “Come on lets get this in Bills room” “Do we have to mum?” “Yes we do” Later on that day Bill was bored so he had a look in his new draws, in the draws their was a crumpled up piece of paper it said “34 avenue Basement Look under grill you will find” “Hmm” said Bill So he went to check it out Under the grill Bill found a secret passageway in the passageway there were booby traps. Bill avoided every trap apart from the big boulder that almost squished him but it fell down a hole at the end of the traps there was a treasure chest Bill carried the chest back to the house and his parents were amazed to see what he had found. So Bill became a billionaire.

The Teacher's Secret

MA - Year 6

When I was little I used to think that the teachers slept at school, now I am almost certain they do1 I was walking through the gloomy corridors of the school, searching for my phone that Mr. Buttery had confiscated. Ahead of me was the staffroom, and almost at once it seemed the perfect place for my phone to be. I went over to the door, creaked it open and crept inside. There was a muffled noise and I peered upwards, however what I saw next made my eyeballs pop out of their sockets! Up above me there was about nine big bat like creatures hanging from the ceiling. I opened my mouth to scream but no sound came out. Then, without warning they awoke and as they got down from the ceiling, they turned back to their natural form; the teachers! As fast as the speed of light, I ran out of the school. While I continue with my life, I will never forget the teacher’s dark secret.

The Beast of the Woods

JMS - Year 6

Today was just a normal, average day until… Tom got on the wrong bus, coming home from school. Once he realised got on the wrong bus, Tom asked the driver, “where is this bus going?” he answered with a groan,”to the dark woods, the legend has it that a dark monster with two heads roams the woods and the only way out of the woods is to kill the beast .” So Tom got off tattered bus and entered the woods. But weirdly the woods seemed to almost close up on its own when Tom entered. He was completely terrified! Suddenly, out of the blue a huge two headed beast attacked him, could it be the monster the driver was talking about? When Tom came face to the beast he knew it was the beast! Tom took a deep breath and punched it in the eye. It immediately fell to the ground then Tom jumped on the beast, took its dagger and killed it, blood streamed every where. Suddenly the world seemed bright again. Five minutes later he got home. But who am I you ask? well know body knows.

The Wolf and the Chestnut Tree

SW - Year 6

Far away from the town lived a glamorous, gorgeous girl called Julliet. In 1987 Julliet was 19 years old. She lived alone in a cottage out side a wood called chestnut tree. Julliet always felt joyful living by herself. One Christmas morning 2 years ago, she was shaken by a noise going RHHHHH!!!!!! Like a lion after its pray. She stayed in one corner of her cottage until 9:00 then, she was that petrified that her face turned in to glass. Julliet’s phone rang and the glass smashed on the floor as she picked up the phone it was her brother saying Julliet had to take Scott her with into the woods in the evening. At midday she entered chestnut tree with her brother Scott. That evening she came out of the woods alone, shaken. The wolf had got him…….. The next morning a dead body was found in the woods.

Finding Grandma's House

W - Year 6

Jessica sat alone in her house feeling scared and worried. Her parents had gone out for the evening and left her at the house. But she didn’t like it on her own. She thought she could maybe go round to somebody’s house. So Jessica rang some friends but they weren’t in. After a while she remembered her grandma wasn’t doing any thing that evening so she rang up to check it was ok to go round. But the only problem was that she didn’t know her way there. Jessica got her warm coat and boots on and left. Jessica had been walking for five minutes and she came to a clearing in the middle of the dark woods. Just then it started to pour down with rain Jessica was cold and scared and she didn’t know her way back. She shouted “can somebody help me”. But she heard no reply. She waited and waited until suddenly she saw someone coming closer to her it was her grandma she went over. They walked to her house and Jessica’s grandma dried her off and got her a warm drink. Then after a while they fell fast asleep.

Going Sledging

E - Year 6

WOOSH! The sledge raced down the hill. Maddie And her best friend Lilly decided to go sledging. As They walked on the white fluffy blanket of snow they Left decorative foot prints behind them. Maddie went First on the rusty sledge, her heart was pounding. She griped on to the sides tightly as Lilly gave a Mighty PUSH! She zoomed down the tall bumpy hill Shouting WAHOO! “Perhaps you should have a go now Lilly” said Maddie kindly handing over the sledge “it’s great fun” Lilly sat on the sledge and gasped “ o..only do a little Push” scutted Lilly. So Maddie slowly pushed Lilly down the bumpy hill. After Lilly had her go they Decided to go to Maddie’s house to have a creamy Hot chocolate and to put their hands and cold little toes In front of the relaxing fire. They had just got to Maddie’s house when… OH NO WE HAVE LEFT OUR SLEDGE AT THE PARK!

The Avalanche

DL - Year 6

Boom! “aahh no not another avalanche” So he tried to dig a deep tunnel after an hour to work he dug and dug He was digging but he didn’t know where to. He was digging four another couple of hours he thought he was never going Get out of there so he toke a kip four a bit. The next morning he kept digging. Finally he found the break through and escaped. But there was a terrorist waiting for him he had a spiky stick with him and slit his thought. WHAT WOULD HAPPEN NEXT ?......

The Wrong Train

E - Year 6

As I got on the train to Queen Victoria, I shuddered as if I was a frozen ice cube. Even though it was summer. I knew something was wrong. Suddenly I screamed we are going the wrong way! Let me take you back to how this happened. My name is Lily I have five sisters named Poppy, Rose, Mia, Katie and two brothers called Ron and Harry. I once went on a train but it went the completely wrong way . . . It turns out we were going to a place called midnight. But people started to disappear. One by one every one went apart from me. But suddenly everything came back it was a dream but we are still going the wrong way so is it a dream? . . .

Challenge Camp

WU - Year 6

It was the day! Sandra could finally join the challenge camp - she couldn’t wait to get there. She had so much confidence in herself. Dad took Sandra to challenge camp where she joined with the rest of her crew. Sandra made new friends and then carried on. The challenge was to climb a tree. Sandra was scared. She thought to herself if she doesn’t climb the tree she is never going to win. She finally made it. She said “this is not too bad just don’t look down” Sandra looked down and fell into the mud leaving her behind. Sandra raced up the tree again as soon as possible because her time was running out but her challenger Matt beat her to it. Matt won the best prizes whereas Sandra came in second place and won a childish teddy bear. Dad came to pick up Sandra and they both headed back home. Sandra realised it was fine because she made new friends and spent so much time having fun with them.

My Teachers are Aliens

DAAS - Year 6

One sunny day Dylan and his dad went on camping trip. They where driving Through the country side. Dylan spotted his 6DS teacher Mr. Smith although I tort it was Mrs. Pettit the 5CP teacher wondering in a cave. I tolled my dad to pull over and we followed them in the cave. I ran to MR. Smiths hand pushed agents my hand goose bumps shivered up my spine it was not Mr. Smith I ran for my life before the aliens grabbed me how knows what they would do to me I stopped for a minute and saw them scuttle back in the cave I know that there hiding some thing in that cave so I followed them again suddenly a glow come from the distends I kept on going he saw then I ran for good then a clank of metal rolled out the cave so I throw It back in and then something jumped out.

Everyone has a Power

AM - Year 6

Charlie is playing basketball with the friends. Charlie and the friends saw something fall sky. BOOM!! Charlie run quickly with the friend’s to saw what happen. Charlie saw a big space gun Charlie said “wow!! Charlie touch something and the friends. Every one have a power every one can fly every one said “wow” awesome!! Every one was so exciting. Every one have a different power. Raul have the fast legs from the world. Alex can fly. The David power is a invisible man. Denis is elastic man. And every day have some work. And together is hero’s the boys band.

Landing on Jupiter

JB - Year 6

“I need to eject quick were gonna crash” said joe.BEEP “make sure you’ve got a parishout” he cryed. 123 jump look we landed on jupiter yelled joe. WOW look at the size of it gasped joe . what is it rocky replied I think it’s a giant platypus the collor sais hes called perry .Wait a minuite said joe weve got to be home by 6 how are we gonna get home our ship is rewind . So joe and his pet dog rocky walked and walked untill they found a battle arena. They went in to have a closer look. And then they heard the alien commentater say we need one more person to battle for this sweet ship. Then suddenly joe yelled at the top of his voice “ill fight for it”. So joe and the strange alien apponent battled it out until joe knocked the apponent out. So joe and rockey flew away on there new ship. The house was in site they went to land but then suddenly some kind of force sent them strate into next door. Then in in a quick second there neighbor flew out the door and and yelled YOU again”

Chased on Holiday

CRM - Year 6

Isabelle woke up and got ready to go on holiday she ran down stairs and got her drawing set. Then ran back up stairs to gets three pillows and her quilt. She woke her mum and dad up and said to them wake up were holiday .Her mum and dad said yeah were getting up don’t worry. Isabelle started to cry her mum and dad got changed and put everything in the car and started to drive. Isabelle got her drawing stuff out and started to draw. She drew it just like the beach that she is going to. It took two hours to get there. They finely got there Isabelle saw her best friend Bella she got out the car and ran to her. Isabelle walk with her best friend Bella out of nowhere someone was following them both they looked back and they started to run away. Bella got her phone out and called the police the police came and took Amy and Denno got arrested for chasing them both. Isabelle and Bella started to laugh and ran back to Isabelle’s mum and dad and went in the tent and went to laughed and they fall asleep.

The Overturned Boat

AM - Year 6

“Oh no! The boat is going to tip over!” I was at the highest point of Dragon Falls at Chessington World of Adventures. If I went back the way I came, I would be hit by a boat- to go down the huge drop without a boat was too dangerous. I was worried. The next boat was closing in. Starting to panic, I suddenly had an idea. I would swim under every boat until I found an empty one. The only thing that was stopping me was the fact that the water was flowing so quickly that surely it would be impossible. There were now three boats closing in on me. I took a deep breath and went under. I swam quickly past the first two boats. I came up to take a breath and noticed that ahead was an empty boat. I went back under and passed the next four boats. I reached the next boat. SPLASH! The boat came to the end of the huge drop. I came to the end of the ride. One of the staff asked me why I was all wet. “Because of the over-turned boat that came.” I replied with relief.

The Living Museum

TD - Year 6

“I can see shadows, what’s happening?” Josh and Charlie were in the museum and suddenly the lights went out. Everything in the museum was coming to life. Luckily Josh had a torch in his bag and he turned it on and there was a caveman right in front of them. So Josh and Charlie had to run away and try and find a hiding place. Luckily Charlie found a hiding space. The caveman was trying to find them but it couldn’t. Charlie and Josh were terrified. But the caveman court another scent and Josh had an idea and threw his sandwich the other direction and they ran the other. Josh and Charlie ran away but they only had one sandwich. Charlie had an idea but there was glass all around the floor and Charlie tripped on his shoe lase and glass went into his leg luckily there was an adult that worked there. He had a first aid kit and tried to stop the bleeding as much as he could. But then Josh found the light switch and turned them on and all the animals turned back into statues.

Local Boy and Dog Saves Tree

NS - Year 6

“Fetch boy!” cried Ben, as his obedient dog Max fetched his bone once again in the park. Ben was determined to save his favourite tree from being cut down. He had a plan. Yesterday, he had heard that the council were going to be cutting his favourite tree down to make a playground. His plan was to go up the tree to make sure they won’t cut the tree down. He climbed to the highest branch of the tree and stayed there.Max yelped and then he barked loudly. Some local residents came to the park to see what the noise was about. They looked up into the branches and saw a boy. “There is a boy in the tree! Call the fire brigade someone” When the fire brigade arrived they brought the mayor Mr Johnson “Come down boy!” called the Mayor. “I won’t come down until you say that you won’t cut the tree. You can put the playground somewhere else!” The entire crowd suddenly shouted “Save the tree” The mayor realised how strong the feeling was and agreed to rethink the plans. The following day headlines read: LOCAL BOY AND DOG SAVES TREE!

Landing on the Moon

FV - Year 6

“What was that noise?” Screamed Billy nerveosly.As he went to see what had happened he saw a great green blob outside his big silver rocket. “I have to land on the moon.” He said to himself, what he was going to do? Billy put on his space suit and went to open the door, just then something grabbed him and took him down a large grey crater on the moon. Billy looked up and saw a whole alien world, as quick as a flash Billy was strapped up and being screeched at. That dark night Billy thought of a way to escape. He had a plan; he would break out of the chains next morning and sneak out. Billy ran all the way to the crater near his rocket but how could he get out with it being so high up Billy saw a ladder and used that to get out but he had to hurry because his oxygen was running out very quick, but he made it in time. “What an adventure!” Billy said in amazement. Billy zoomed home to his small house in England. “I should have brought my dog!”

Surrounded by Dinosaurs

G - Year 6

Danny screamed as the boat was heading off the main track, “Mum why have all the lights gone out?” They were on water wave ride at chesington, heading off on an unknown adventure. After the lights went out, Danny could see a faint light, it was one of the statue dinosaurs, but as they were passing by, Mum and Danny shrieked as they saw the 12 foot tall dinosaur staring at them as they moved past. Before they knew it they were surrounded by man-eating dinosaurs. Danny had an idea; he had some left over cookies from lunch, so he threw four cookies to each hungry dinosaur so they wouldn’t notice them escaping. Danny and Mum quickly pushed the boat up the hill and squeezed back into the main track and slowly floated the exit route. “Mum, next time we come here, can we go on this ride again? It was a great adventure”.

Lost at the Waterpark

LH - Year 6

Feeling excited, I was jumping with joy at the water park on a hot beaming day. When suddenly a big splash of water covered Alice. “Mind out Alice!” I shouted. This was going to be Alice’s worst holiday in Dubai EVER! After the horrible advent for Alice, we both headed of back to the house. Me and Alice were really hungry and could smell some delicious that made their tummy rumble like an Earthquake. I and Alice couldn’t remember what letter stage their house was in. “Lauren, I think we are block J or K, I really can’t remember.” Cried Alice. “What about I check block J and you check K.” suggested Lauren. “Great!” Replied Alice. Finally Alice knocked on the door and my mum answered and asked. “Where is Lauren?” “She’s knocking on J.” whispered Alice. Lauren came sprinting up the stairs passed all people animals and gave her mum a big hug. Lauren and Alice are relieved that they are both not lost any more. They both went upstairs and continued like nothing ever happened.

The Stepmum Confusion

LS - Year 6

I thought she was my step mum but it turns out she was not. It was 1920 and the usual miserable Tuesday afternoon. I was sat in my bedroom listening to my radio .Suddenly someone burst in to my room ‘few it was only someone with my lunch’. My best friend Ellie was seriously ill. However I was determined to find her real mum. I stood up and walked to my draws and pulled out the first piece of paper. I already know the address to Ellie’s real mum’s house. I wrote a quick letter to say please come and help Ellie she’s terribly ill. One night I snuck out while Ellie was still sleeping and ran through the quiet street of Southampton. I ran into the post office and quickly posted it and jogged home. I hope it can help Ellie I really do.

The School Trip

OW - Year 6

As I got out of the bus I saw an archaeology dig. As we went through the trench in a glimpse of my eye I saw a piece of paper. I slipped out of the group and picked it up. It read: Dark-room Treasure-store Lots of gold Press a button. There was a block of stone I scraped of the soil and pushed the button a door scraped open. It revealed a vast cave. I went in and saw a treasure chest. I opened it and saw?

Gone

IF - Year 6

“Hurry up Emily” screeched Mum “we are going to the antiques market” my mum is a real bargain hunter. I ran down the stairs tripping over my battered old trainers “Emily get in the car” mum hissed reluctantly I stepped in to our rusty car. Mum and I walked round the tables full of untidy mess and old clothes. “Ooo” mum clapped her hands together “this music box is lovely, um, sir what is the price for this beautiful piece of wood” “Well, our first price is fifteen pounds but we are happy to negotiate” said a man with a strong Yorkshire accent “deal” said mum “what” I thought. When I woke up the next morning Mum wasn’t up I thought that is strange mum is always up early so I gingerly went into her room but she wasn’t in suddenly the music box started playing I turned around and then I walked over to the box it had a note on it said: Though you look she is not here She has played her last song my dear The music has taken her soul Her body is now as dark as coal “mum where are you” I whispered…

The Dream that Died

JS - Year 6

A boy called Chris once had a bad dream. He had never had a bad dream. He didn’t now what would happen in the dream. As he appeared in the dream, he could see lots of old buildings. An old person came up to greet him. Chris was really nervous, he did not no what to do. Because he had never met an old man in a dream. He started to look around the old place. He was really scared. Then in the background he heard a voice say. “Its nearly time to go”. He had a last stroll around before he went home, but Before he new it he left the dream that died.

The Ice-Cream Monster

KB - Year 6

As Sally sprinted down the steps of the coach she yelped in pain as a snake sank his teeth in to her flesh. She couldn’t help it despite the fact that lunch was nearly ready but she limped off in search of an adventure? When Sally came to a cave she felt sick with guilt. Over in the distance she could just make out a dim light revealing an opening at the other end of the mangy smelling cave. Five minutes later Sally was tumbling in to a world of ice-cream fascinated by her surroundings. All she could do was eat, since her appetite was increasingly high. “Excuse me! I’m going to have to eat you because you’re eating my ice-cream!” something screeched. He started lobbing chocolaty stuff at Sally; however she fired back with strawberry sauce and marshmallows that lay beneath her. After about three minutes, the ice-cream monster curled up in a ball, dead with exhaustion. Sally had saved the day once again (although she had never saved it before). She sauntered back to the cave, overjoyed. As she returned to camp Sally wondered out loud, “Have they missed me?” “NO!” chorused the rest of the group!

My Missing Finger

OC - Year 6

As I was walking down the street and I was thinking about one thing in particular and that was my operation to remove my finger. I was so scared and nervous I felt faint. The reason why I have to remove my finger is because it is all dead and is going to fall off anyway. As I reached my house I was so scared to talk to my mum as she was the one that said to have my finger amputated. I new why I had to have the operation, as I walked in through the door my heart was pounding. The next day was the day of the operation and I was going to have to go to the hospital in one hour. At the hospital I went into a room and had a chat with the doctor he said I am not the only one to have this problem and actually that made me feel better. The operation went to plan and I was very happy I was in hospital for two days after the operation and am now at home. For the people that are having a operation they are not that bad.

The Lone Woman Pirate

E - Year 6

The ocean sprayed on her face whilst, the salty droplets clung to her matted hair. She was free. But, she would pay the price. And, the price wasn’t gold. Scarlet was climbing the rigging, of The Fortune, when, she was called down. It was time. She had been waiting for this moment. The captain, a youthful young fellow still in his twenties with a sturdy build and broad shoulders, told her to write her name on the account. The captain, also, read out the terms. She replied with the words “I will.” She was now, a pirate! Scarlett went into her, lone, cabin, because she was the only woman on this pirate ship. If she had stayed on deck a moment longer she would have seen the mermaid. He was after her. The person who came on deck was a different person. Scarlett’s long blonde hair was plaited then tied in a bun. She had a new spring to her step. It was as graceful as a dance. The men froze in mid battle. They found her irresistible. Her plan had worked. The gun was in the fold of her dress. She drew it from the position that it held. Her hand trembling. After that, it was all over in a matter of moments. There was an abundance of rum, soon after. They had won so; Scarlett was the hero of the hour.

Coming Down the Mountain

AS - Year 6

Snow covered the peak of Mount Kilimanjaro. It was really the most beautiful sight my eyes had ever set upon. It was bitter. “Mum! Dad!” I bellowed. I heard no reply; I was alone. It was slippery as ice. Realising it was getting dark, I panicked. Cautiously, I staggered down the mountain, anxious about my parents. My head pounded. Huge dense trees engulfed me. Hearing the distant roar of lions, made me shiver. Numerous twigs lay on the moist ground. Dead plans were everywhere to be seen. I lay in agony. Blood gushed from my painful leg. I had stumbled straight into a jagged rock. My heart raced. Darkness dominated… Once again, the landscape changed. Hundreds of stones covered the moist ground. I prayed to see my parents safe and sound back at the base camp. Limping, I strained my eyes to see. At that instant, an eagle with outstretched claws flew towards me. Rapidly, I dived to ground. Goosebumps crawled up my trembling arms. Hours passed. There was still no sign of my parents. Eventually, I reached the bottom. To my amazement, I made out my parents darting towards me. I was on cloud 9. I hope I never have to experience an adventure like that again.

The Lost Jungle

A - Year 6

Aah! Squealed Laura collapsing down a gloomy undiscovered hole in the pavement .Laura unexpectedly landed with a crash and a half-hunched back. A complete banana lay underneath her! She continued on into the unlit jungle and discovered a frightening pair of eyes…MONKEY EYES! She asked him for the directions out of the lost, abandoned jungle. He unwillingly explained that the only way out was the path leading out from his homey-habitat. The monkey made a deal: if Laura gave him a banana, she would be led out by the monkey. Laura sealed the relatively easy deal.Amazingly; the monkey took this as a compliment and kept his deal. Strolling out of the endangered jungle, Laura revolved round and found the little monkey sobbing from beneath the dirty, soil-covered ground. They had become great friends so Laura happily took the monkey to be her well-respected pet. They led out of the jungle together to a world of happiness.

Lost on the Mountain

N - Year 6

“Where are we?” screamed Rose. As she wondered helplessly around a deserted mountain “We’re on a mountain, silly,” snapped Hermione. Suddenly, a remote clipping, buzzing sound reached Hermione, Rose, Mandy and Lilly’s ears. “It sounds like a helicopter,” Lilly gasped. The buzzing sound seemed like it was approaching closer and closer. From out of the corner of Hermione’s eye she spotted the propeller of a helicopter and yelled herself hoarse. The others followed suit. “Please stop sobbing, Mandy, the helicopter seems to have spotted us!” Pleaded Hermione. Mandy only 8, did as she was told. Meanwhile in the helicopter they were debating whether they should see if the children were lost. They decided it wouldn’t do much harm. Back at the mountain still waving desperately, Hermione secretly gave up hope. Fortunately, the helicopter dived on to the mountain and two burly men jumped out and asked if they were lost. They replied the obvious answer and stepped into the helicopter. It took flight and the four girls cried with joy to be reunited with their family and friends.

It All Went Quiet

EW - Year 6

I could hear the rain pattering on my window and the murmur of the television downstairs .Abruptly ,everything came to a halt .The rain was still lashing down but I could no longer hear it, or the television "Mum are you there? "Nobody answered so I sneaked downstairs to see my mum Sitting in front of the television "Mum Why didn't you answer me ?" Words escaped from her mouth but I couldn't hear them .I ran outside to find my dad parking the car. "dad, oh dad I can't hear the TV or the rain!" once again words came out of his mouth but I couldn't hear them. suddenly I was falling down the world was spinning whizzing. the pavement met my face and I felt blood. everywhere .mum and dad were carrying into the car. My baby baby brother was in his car seat ,tomato red .tears were falling down his face. he was screaming .mum and dad were shouting at each other.I could tell as they were red in the face too. I woke up to find figures in white rushing around me taking my blood pressure. There was a bandages on my arms an face .mum and dad were crying "what an adventure !"I thought .

The Maze

KAE - Year 6

One frosty evening Sam & Heidi went to a Christmas fun fair. Out the corner of Sam’s eye she saw a sign that said maze trip and at the end there will be a surprise! So Sam drags Heidi to the maze and entered the maze. Sam thought how fun it was to go through the maze with Heidi. They came to two different ways. So Heidi said “I will go first through this way and come get you if it’s the right way”. Sam was scared. Heidi came darting back for Sam. “This is the way to go said Heidi”. “Come on” she shouted “were still in the running to win the surprise”! “I hope we win the surprise” whispered Heidi. “Yeah it will be so cool” said Sam. “What would you do with the surprise? Sam assumed. Sam & Heidi come to five different ways. This time they didn’t know what to do. So Sam suggested that both of them should take the first one just to be safe. So they carried on down the first lane. They came to a dead end. So they turned back and took the second lane and got out and won trophies.

Motorbike Ride

TB - Year 6

One morning my brothers Luke, James, Nick and my sister Sian arrived. Motorbike Park with hills. We all went riding on motorbikes. Soon was dark. It was late now and must go home quickly. The road had lots of hills. It was a long way and the petrol ran out. My brothers phone dad but phone dead. Dad car meet motorbike petrol fill up the tank away home.

Journey to Spain

RR - Year 6

I was getting ready and packing for my holiday trip. “I’m going to Spain” said Aiden Aiden’s parents called him to come down stairs he was jumping with joy. Aiden said goodbye to his best friends. Aiden went to his private aeroplane with his parents they were all set to go. He was a quarter away from Spain. Suddenly the aeroplane started to shake the captain said “our petrol is running out quickly get a parachute under your seat” I was so confused but I went with it. I was screaming out of my heart when I jumped I landed in this kind of jungley forest after my parents landed. Then a snake started to appear slowly slimy it came down. My father told me to jump and wait to the other side so I did. After my father said “that was a close one”. “I can hear some crawling sounds” said my mother then we saw some spiders coming. We ran as fast as we can they were still chasing us. After about three minutes we lost them and suddenly there was a sign saying Spain. I made it. I’m here with my parent’s. Yippee yay.

Kidnapped

CD - Year 6

Lucy and Stacey were best friends as well as sisters, they had been at the park since 10am and they were getting hungry so headed off home for lunch. As they reached the park gates they saw a strange car driving really slowly they thought nothing about it. When they turned into Harris Road they noticed the strange car was at the bottom. The Engine revving softly. Lucy and Stacey were getting worried. Stacey and Lucy turned around to go across the field and through the old alley. Suddenly they hear foot steps they both turned around to see who is was he was wearing a long dirty black coat and black trouser he looked peculiar he started to walk towards them Lucy and Stacy sprinted round the corner Lucy peeked round the edge of the wall the peculiar man was there…

The Leaking Boat

AH - Year 6

Petrified by the rocking of the boat Taaj yelled “Help, the boat is leaking!” They were abroad. The boat trip in the Mediterranean was a disaster. The leak was eventually getting higher, higher and higher until it came upon the deck, everybody stuck there gum together so it could hold the leak. Taaj offered to swim to the leak and stick it to the crack. As Taaj swam to the leak he stuck the gum there but suddenly his foot got stuck… Taaj was gasping for air, he could not see because of the salt water but in a split second a hand grabbed Taaj’s hand grabbed him but he would loose his foot. A second later a hand grabbed his foot and he was free once he came out of the water everyone aboard praised him but then the captain asked if he did it, seconds later a silent nod appeared. The captain took everybody home safely, When Taaj returned to Iraq and his life was normal for now and he thought what an adventure.

The Toys are Alive

NZ - Year 6

“There coming to life” “Jack, Ben run” Nathan was very confused how the Toys came to life. “Lets go to Hamleys top floor” (said Nathan) “Are you crazy” (said Ben) “we could die the toys are giant and ALIVE” “Nathan, Jack is right (said Ben) The wooden marching soldier was chasing Jack and Nathan but they launched the whoopee cushion And it made the soldier go unconscious because it stunk. “Help me! I’m trapped and the parrot is pecking me”. “I’m coming” (said Jack) “let’s go Nathan” “ok” (said Nathan). Nathan was picking up jelly beans he found, Meanwhile …Jack was rescuing Ben from the gigantic toy parrot. “Nathan, Nathan Ben is alright” (said Jack). “Let’s go to the bottom floor” (Said Nathan). Nathan pressed a button on the till And it went back to normal, he woke up the next day and it was all a dream.

The Wave

RD - Year 6

“There’s a big wave coming” Jay shouted as the sea shook the boat. Jay started to feel frightened. The wave was getting closer Jay tried to speed up the boat but he could not. Before he knew it he was washed away. Jay was in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. “Help” Jay screamed. Jay felt something grab his leg. Jay was being pulled down Jay looked at what was holding him it was an octopus. The octopus was taking him in a hole he could not hold his breath any longer. But he felt dry and he didn’t have to hold his breath anymore. Jay looked up he was on a island their was a banana tree. Jay took a banana once he finished it he went in the water. Jay turned around there was a wave coming Jay ran to the back of the island their was a cruise boat. He dived back in the water and swam towards the boat. The passenger saw Jay and told the captain to slow the boat down. At that moment I knew I was saved I was euphoric.

Changing the Clock

LS - Year 6

“That’s going to hurt” I thought As my pain started to grow from my twisted ankle, terrified of what was going to happen Next in Hourlets zoo. As I thought my life was over from no where a strange little boy he said shh I whisper “who are you” “I think it’s gone, the names Matt and you” Matt said “Liberty what’s going on” I asked “well every body’s gone just when the zoo Keepers were feeding and we have to save the world. “Here’s a bell whistle blow if you need me ring it if you need me bye and good luck. After a lot of searching I realised that the clock was ten seconds late so I Blow my whistle five minuets later Matt arrived and before I know it I was Up on top of the clock tower changing the clock ten seconds forward Then in one second (more like ten) every body was here, so that was my day how was yours?

Sinking in the Lake

AH - Year 6

On a bright sunny day in the countryside, where all the birds sang and where the tree’s whistled in the spring breeze. There was my cousin Emily and me Amelia, when suddenly there was an almighty scream… It was coming from the lake. It was Emily she had seen a shadow lurking around the other side of the river. “Ahh, stop”. As Emily started to say that, something bazaar started to happen! Emily had appeared to start sinking into the sand and mud on the lake floor! “HELP” she shouted.” Hold on Emily am coming “! As Amelia was coming to save Emily, Emily was beginning to vigorously sinking more and more! When suddenly Emily came to a grinding halt…! Amelia had pulled her out Just in the nick of time. After that Emily promised never to go near the lake again. When they got back Emily mum said “what have you been doing today”?” nothing really” said Emily and Amelia grinning, secretly. ”Emily next time I come around to your house do you think we will go again”?

Toy Terror

BG - Year 6

Tommy is a 7 year old boy who has a great imagination . He doesn’t have many friends so he spends most of his time playing with his toys. “Go spotty you can save the train.” “Tommy! Its past your bedtime and plus, you have school tomorrow! Explained mum . “All right mum, ZZZZZ! Tommy was strolling along when suddenly he was swept into a magical world! It had toys everywhere; there were sky scrapers that were wardrobes, there was an enormous bed that looked like it was used as a block of flats. After a while a small spotty dog came over and asked me what I was doing here and I didn’t know what to say. I eventually told them what really happened , however they didn’t believe me. They said I was a spy. They decided to put me in jail; I wasn’t lonely because I had a room mate called Jeffery. One stormy afternoon I got the hiccups , Jeffery [my friend] was trying all day to scare me but it never worked until I fell asleep. “BOO!” In a flash I woke up and realised it was all a dream!

The Mysterious Death of Jack Mobin

JH - Year 6

“This is for you Sam,” “What are you doing!” “you will understand Sam,” Then my only friend Jack Mobin plunged in to the darkness. Every day from day on I think of his last words “you will understand,” Two years later my birthday to be precise, I had a surprise came through the front door literally “surprise,” my parents were all geared up for a holiday “ as its you’re birthday you should come to Canada with us!” “Year,” I said without thinking. To get to our resort we had to go over a gorge by cable car but half way the cable car started shaking then the doors flung open I fell out and everything went blank When I woke up I was in a jungle in front of a Egyptian temple with my curiosity I entered the temple the was a door with a riddle “Open the door and doge the knifes to find were the treasure lies. I opened the door to find many arrows flying towards me I dodged all of them. I continued and found a dead body holding the treasure. I recognised the body it was Jack mobin!

Is Drawing Dangerous?

AH - Year 6

It was Saturday another boring evening in the James’ house. Oliver was wondering round the house like a lost soul looking for something to do. Oliver was adventurous however when it came to thinking of an idea he was hopeless. Oliver walked into the kitchen asking: “I’m dying of boredom” “Why don’t you draw” replied Mrs. James, his mouth was shaped like a little o. He sat on his desk drawing a stickman battle scene making noises as the tanks shot there cannons. Just when he was going to draw a spitfire, something hit his arm. Oliver looked down on the page and realised that the men were moving: shooting, bombing and knifing. The men joined forces to jump on me tying to bring me down. The spinning chair fell back and they were throwing ropes over him. Oliver picked up the pencil and drew a hoover; he picked it up then sucked them all up leaving the ropes. He got the ropes and tied them round the hoover tube. Oliver drew a time vortex and threw them in it. Oliver went into the kitchen saying: “What an adventure I had today, I will not draw again!”

The Lonely Child

AC - Year 6

It was a long summers day and Hannah had just got back from school and her mum and dad were going out to a special restaurant in town. It was Hannah’s first time been left alone, but she was quit scared. “By Hannah remember don’t answer the do to anybody”. About 30 minutes after they had gone. The door creaked open and a black figure appeared from the door and started to come up the stairs. I ran in to my room and tried to lock my door it was no use it wouldn’t lock, she quickly jumped in to her wardrobe but the man opened the wardrobe and held a knife to her neck…

6 Minutes from Death

SH - Year 6

It was the day of the fountain flood; it was only 2 hours away. I had to do something; the world couldn’t die out because this would be a disaster. No more living creatures we’d be extinct for ever. The death every one dies in sudden movement. Time flew past as a virus or some kind of thing making people ill. 1HOUR left. I gathered a group of people who would spare there lives for others to travel and take thirsty animals there to drink the water as well people. Some were chopping down trees to fill the gap so only small bits of water would get through. Builders came and helped pin down the trees so they would not fall down the fountain. Every one went home ,that wasn’t the end, thunder clouds came then it was 6 MINUTES FROM DEATH I and my family died after that so did my friends in that case every one died, although when I woke from my deep, dreamy sleep I was alive. I shouted my family they were all alive too. I was in hospital because my mum told me I ran into the wall!

Do Pigs Fly?

AC - Year 6

It was Saturday, the rain was rolling down the window and I was so bored, there was nothing to do. I started thinking about myths and legends, there not supposed to be real are they? My Grandad told me this story which I like so I’m going to tell you it… It was another day on greenwood farm .Grandad was checking the pigs. when wings started growing out of the pigs. He thought to himself how this could be wings growing out of the pigs! He ran out of the shed however he stopped and said if I tell someone I might get the blame for what is happening also the pigs might get killed. So he did the silliest thing ever he got on one of the pigs that had not left the ground. The pigs flew up into the clouds and it was amazing above the clouds. There was a pig land full of different types of pigs. Grandad didn’t know what to do, well there wasn’t much he could do get off the pig and fall to his death or live with them. Well he obviously found some way to come down.

The Rain Elf

ZS - Year 6

It was the usual boring Thursday morning: Get up, go for a walk and have something to eat. But this day was different. Let me tell you about it… We set off for our Thursday stroll to the wood and bought a picnic including sandwiches, crisps and fruit. We travelled by boat like we always do and then we got there. We emptied our hamper and started eating. It was nice food, so nice that someone joined us … an elf! The elf had a typical elf costume on and deep grey eyes. It was strange really because as soon as the elf came to us it started raining, we did not know why. So we ran and ran and ran. We returned to the boat but found it was not there because the rain was so bad. So we had to spend the night in the hut. We settled ourselves down to go to sleep but I was suddenly awoken by something running through the door it was the rain elf.

The Swamps in the Isle of View

HD - Year 6

The two children hastened to the gloomy, acidic swamps in the Isle of View. The swamp let out a rancid, green vapor, the smell was worse than a rubbish dump in a toilet. The oldest child (Alexander Goth) was very gullible; his friend told him there was a swamp demon was in the swamp! Is this true? As for the other child, Celia Dreamer, was not gullible and thought this is a load of rubbish. POW! The monumental dead tree thudded on to the floor! Celia (the clever one) tried to find the source of this very unlikely event. The source of the event was a huge, Fur covered; three headed bear! “I’ve h-heard of these!” Celia stammered. “It’s a Shadow B-Bea-r-r-r-r-r! Worst creature ever been found.” Celia trembled. The Bear snarled at the children! There was one thing different about the children – THEY’RE MAGICAL! They are not ordinary children. Together, they went to magic school. They know their entire junior level spells grade A* wizards. They could easily defeat the bear! “Uh oh.” Alexander moaned.”No wands! WE’RE GONNA DIE!!” He Cried. “Hey we can use fingers!” Celia told him.

The Mysterious Alien

EG - Year 6

The icy cold water crashed down from the enormous waterfall. A mysterious alien appeared. Standing still, swaying it's revolting but muscular body, it clamly waved. In the sky an evil, green, grotesque eye spyed upon the alien. Instantly a crimson red liquid dripped out of the evil eye, it rapidly poured on to the alien. In the distance a blazing, red fire ball exploded, everthing disappeared!

The Spacecraft

CS - Year 6

Whoosh! An outerspace lifecraft glided through the freezing water. It was searching for life forms other than human. Suddenly, a mysterious, odd looking creature swimming through the frost biting water, was spotted by the lifecraft. A hi-tec satellite hovered in the damp air, and transmitted radio signals to a nearby UFO. The glowing UFO created a meteorite and it exploded against a colossal rock. Fire flames erupted and sank into the sparkling water. All fell deathly silent.

My Desperate Kayaking Trip

CA - Year 6

What an adventure! . A little unsteady at first, I had soon got used to ferry gliding- aiming higher upstream than I wanted to be, to compensate for the power of the white water. This was my first kayaking trip and the anticipation of the looming rapids made me gulp. My name was called, so I took tentative strokes over to Jenna, our instructor. She explained how it was important to keep paddling furiously, or I wouldn’t be able to turn into the eddy. So I got onto the rapids and grinned happily, it was wonderful! The water rushing past me, the trees blurring as I whooshed past, my friends waiting for me at the end. But I forgot to paddle! I had missed the eddy! Then a large rock appeared in front of me! I screamed as my boat smashed against the rock and capsized (flipped over), and I tugged at my spray deck. I couldn’t get it off! I began to panic; I was rushing down the river at top speed, upside-down, unable to breath, and terrified. I gave one final desperate tug, then bobbed up gasping for air. I was relieved to Jenna, right next to me, shouting at me to grab her boat. I held on for my life. She twisted her paddle and kayaked furiously towards the bank. We landed smoothly on the sandy bank. I was shivering violently. She smiled at me. “I think that you just earned your 2*,” she said, “all you needed was a capsize!”

The Hidden Forest

CM - Year 6

One day John was sitting beside a river bank with his dog. Sudenly his dog ran away. The man followed it deep into a dark forest, he swore he saw a minotaur. John ran further and saw a cave, there was a big door at the end of it. He walked quietly incase anything was in there, he didn't want to wake any monsters. John was very scared, he managed to get enough nerve to go up and knock on the door. Somthing very strange opened the door, John recognised the creature from a book he had red about Greek Mythology. It was half man, half horse. The creature ask john "what are you?" John said "I am a human, my name is John. What are you?" "I am a Centaur, my name is Qualler" The Centaur invited John in for soup. Qualler told John that the soup was made from deer. Just then John saw his dog again. John ran after his dog. When he was running through the forest it felt like his mind was playing tricks on him, when suddenly...... John woke up, he had been dreaming. Phew he thought, and fell right back to sleep.

Aurora the Goddess of Dawn

DL - Year 6

Rustling through my cupboard, I searched for my cleaning supplies; once again I can’t find them. I search and search and hunt and hunt but they are nowhere to be found. Finally I find something, not my supplies though, a glittery box covered in diamonds, rubies, emeralds and more. Inside the box is a letter and a single buttoned remote. Carefully I pull out the letter, it read “I'm Aurora the Goddess of Dawn, please help me there is destruction in mine and my fellow goddess’s beloved home, save me! From Aurora." Cautiously I pressed the button. A bright light appeared in the sky then I was in a new world. I saw a Goddess, then I heard a scream from inside a tower, I was curious, the Goddess assured me it was nothing. I dashed toward the tower and burst through the door inside was a Goddess she told me her name was Aurora I explained that I meet Aurora out side she’s fake she exclaimed. Look if you through water on the fake she will disintegrate so I snuck up on the phoney and threw water on her and she faded away. What an adventure!...

The Remains of HMS Mary Rose

CD - Year 6

Dear Diary 8-12-2010 Today was such an exiting day. When I was on my way to my friend’s house, I took a short-cut through the woods. Within these woods I found remains of HMS Mary Rose and a fossil. So I sprinted home and explained to my mother how I found these. Although I was forbidden for going into the woods I had to tell her about my find. At this time I did not know what the ship remains were from. Later on my Mum booked a spot to show the museum owners the historical remains. At 13:30pm we took a journey to the museum. We convinced them to come to the woods and collect the remains. This is the time when they told me that the boat remains were from the HMS Mary Rose and the fossil was called a belemnite. The historians took the remains and offered me a £100 pounds. Although it was tempting to take I turned it down and said no because it was a great day!

The Deep Freeze

HAA - Year 6

Bob went on a one day expedition to the North Pole. He was walking in the -70 degree frosting snow. Then he saw it! It was a very dark and scary cave. He then felt a chill run down his frozen spine. Suddenly he saw a red and white coloured stiff figure. He approached it with sudden caution. He was now face to face with Santa clause!!! He quickly bent down and got out his mini pocket sized knife. He then looked up. Santa clause was gone! He then saw Santa. Santa then pounced on to Bob. “EVIL SANTA”!!! Bob Shouted. Then Whamas Talker Bob’s pet porcupine charged in to Santa’s mouth and released his spikes in to Santa clause’s innards. Whamas came sliding out of the evil Santa’s Back side. He was dead and so was Santa. Later Bob got captured by Russian solders in the North Pole and got executed.

A Day as a Superhero

MHU - Year 6

Once in a school day “SPLAT”. Dave was so sleepy; he fell asleep in his cereal. He was dreaming. Let’s go in. Dave was singing his superhero theme tune, he was soaring through “THE LAZER ZONE”. He was wearing pants over his superhero costume .With his super vision he saw an old woman trip over a pebble. The citizens were all calling for DAVE, DAVE. He plunge in and out the people, the split second she was about to fall and swooped underneath the woman, saving her. He went back to his secret laboratory. The Minions Mark II (his assistants) cheered, also doing the Mexican wave as he came by. It was almost like magnets and iron fillings (which he learnt about the other day in science). As he was getting praised, he didn’t realise the window in front of him. “THUD” he woke up in breakfast. He splattered cereal everywhere. His mum screeched at him for ruining the kitchen, and said why are you wearing pants over your trousers? He wandered too and carried on eating his cereal.

My Adventure

JB - Year 6

On Wednesday 7th September 2010, Jessica and Trevor walked with Trevor’s dog, Carly, in the park. The park was near at Trevor house in Wellingborough. I walked with Trevor and dog Carly in path near a shop. The dog Carly saw a cat in path. The cat run then Carly starts to chase the cat. Suddenly the cat fell in the pond then Carly ran to the pond and fell in. Carly tried out the pond but can’t out. Suddenly, Trevor was sad because the Carly was dies and I and Trevor ring to Trevor mum, “Come on Trevor mum was help for Carly was dies”. Trevor mum came and gave get Carly out. Then ring to vet ask to help to Carly. In car we arrive vet. The vet gave Carly injection. Carly was wake up then better now again walking in the park.

Zombies on the Rollercoaster

JB - Year 6

One foggy and windy day Chloe and Sasha were at a fun fair and were queuing to go on the creepy rollercoaster when they eventually got on it and got in the tunnel they heard a click. The ride stopped. The girls saw a light. Suddenly they heard footsteps then Chloe alleged “ZOMBIES” What. Said Sasha. Zombies.ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! “HELP US!” They are coming all over the place. We need to get out of here. Quick. There is a light said Sasha. Let’s follow it. They followed the light but the door closed. This way screeched the girls. RUN!!!! We will never get back home sash please defeat them. Ok Chloe ill try. Thanks sash! “go on” said Chloe. Please. Fine said sash. Cheers. Said Chloe runnnnn!..

The Green Alien

GS - Year 6

One sunny day Jake and his dad went on a hunting expedition and started looking for dears. They thought they had seen one and shot at it. When they got closer they were shocked to see a green alien witch had blue clothes. Jake said wait is your name he replied sliver he tolled Jake how he was shot done as he was flying in space. As sliver was taking he fell on the flour Jake sat down we’ve him sliver gave him a ring and said you are the one ho will save the world and died Jake did not no what to do and ran off.

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